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:iconslamdunker:
This is a wonderful combination of a typical landscape subject and a portrait shot. I like the details of the water and the way the model placed in the photo. She sits on the left edge and looks to the right upper corner. Lines of sight may act like geometry, here it forms a diagonal and brings in some movement against the vertical lines of the water. This works very well together with the rainbow, which is one of the main subjects. I have no real critique about the composition itself, but i'd like to see more of the rainbow. Right now it's a bit in the background and deserves more attention. Maybe you can bring it out in postproduction, even a colorkey may work here.
overall: nice work!
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:iconadvocate2000:
Fantastic picture with real depth. :)

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Thank you :)

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:iconadvocate2000:
you are very welcome :)

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:iconrexdeomnia:
Great shot!

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Thanks dude!

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:iconkristal-marie:
That came out great, it looks incredible. Thanks for putting up with me, I had an awesome time.
:iconjzcj5:
Right on :D I had a good time with it too. How was your flight? I heard you went to San Francisco also. Did you get a chance to look at some of the galleries or anything?

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I'm leaving bitterness behind
This time I'm cleaning out my mind
There is no space for the regrets
I will remember to forget
:iconkristal-marie:
Long flight, but I can't complain.
We went to the Legion of Honor in San F, but no local galleries. I had a fantastic time there.
:iconjzcj5:
Right on :)

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I'm leaving bitterness behind
This time I'm cleaning out my mind
There is no space for the regrets
I will remember to forget

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PENTAX Corporation
PENTAX K10D
1/800 second
F/5.6
18 mm
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Nov 2, 2009, 2:33:43 AM

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